Desiderata

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OVERALL AVERAGE RATING
PLOT DEVELOPMENT: Say It ... Vampire!
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: Stupid, shiny Volvo owner.
PROSE/DESCRIPTIVE WRITING: The lion fell in love with the lamb.
GRAMMAR: How You Likin the Rain, Girl?
HIGHLY ADDICTIVE: My brand of heroin.

Desiderata by Kimpy0464

Desiderata is latin for “desired things or something that is needed, wanted.” Both Edward and Bella want happiness, but will their pig-headed stubbornness get in the way of finding true love and happiness? Based upon Jane Austen’s “Pride and Prejudice.”

Info
Chapters 29
Word Count 160,496
Rating M

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One Response to Desiderata

  1. Loving40s says:

    This is one of the most underappreciated fics around, imo. Bella’s character is very well developed. She’s sweet and snarky all at the same time. Great descriptive prose. There are some grammar issues, but they’re forgiveable. Also, some of the romantic dialogue is a bit cheesy, imo, but I still loved the story overall.

    OVERALL AVERAGE RATING
    PLOT DEVELOPMENT: Say It ... Vampire!
    CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: Stupid, shiny Volvo owner.
    PROSE/DESCRIPTIVE WRITING: The lion fell in love with the lamb.
    GRAMMAR: How You Likin the Rain, Girl?
    HIGHLY ADDICTIVE: My brand of heroin.

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PLOT DEVELOPMENT: Say It ... Vampire!
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: Stupid, shiny Volvo owner.
PROSE/DESCRIPTIVE WRITING: The lion fell in love with the lamb.
GRAMMAR: How You Likin the Rain, Girl?
HIGHLY ADDICTIVE: My brand of heroin.

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