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Bonne Foi

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OVERALL AVERAGE RATING
PLOT DEVELOPMENT: Say It ... Vampire!
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: Stupid, shiny Volvo owner.
PROSE/DESCRIPTIVE WRITING: The lion fell in love with the lamb.
GRAMMAR: How You Likin the Rain, Girl?
HIGHLY ADDICTIVE: My brand of heroin.

Bonne Foi by Amethyst Jackson

Edward Masen was changed in 1918 and abandoned by his sire. He feeds on human blood, unaware of any other way…until he stumbles across college freshman Bella Swan for a night that will change everything.

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Chapters	41
Word Count	181,159
Rating	M

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PLOT DEVELOPMENT: Say It ... Vampire!
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: Stupid, shiny Volvo owner.
PROSE/DESCRIPTIVE WRITING: The lion fell in love with the lamb.
GRAMMAR: How You Likin the Rain, Girl?
HIGHLY ADDICTIVE: My brand of heroin.

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