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| OVERALL AVERAGE RATING |  |
| PLOT DEVELOPMENT: Say It ... Vampire! | |
| CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: Stupid, shiny Volvo owner. | |
| PROSE/DESCRIPTIVE WRITING: The lion fell in love with the lamb. | |
| GRAMMAR: How You Likin the Rain, Girl? | |
| HIGHLY ADDICTIVE: My brand of heroin. | |
Immortal Beloved by elusivetwilight
‘My thoughts go out to you, my Immortal Beloved, waiting to learn whether or not fate will hear us. I can live only wholly with you or not at all.’ Newborn vampire Bella stumbles through the centuries to unlock what has happened to Edward.
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| Chapters | 16 |
| Word Count | 35,638 |
| Rating | M |
This is a wonderful story, with stunningly lyrical prose – every word is like a precious gem. A true story of star-crossed vampire lovers, separated by their enemies and a vast expanse of time. The letters which Edward writes to Bella contain direct quotes from those which Beethoven sent to his Immortal Beloved, and you will marvel, as I did, at how well they fit the story of separated vampire lovers.
This fic is woefully under appreciated – I can’t recommend it highly enough.