|OVERALL AVERAGE RATING|
|PLOT DEVELOPMENT: Say It ... Vampire!|
|CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: Stupid, shiny Volvo owner.|
|PROSE/DESCRIPTIVE WRITING: The lion fell in love with the lamb.|
|GRAMMAR: How You Likin the Rain, Girl?|
|HIGHLY ADDICTIVE: My brand of heroin.|
Immortal Beloved by elusivetwilight
‘My thoughts go out to you, my Immortal Beloved, waiting to learn whether or not fate will hear us. I can live only wholly with you or not at all.’ Newborn vampire Bella stumbles through the centuries to unlock what has happened to Edward.