|OVERALL AVERAGE RATING|
|PLOT DEVELOPMENT: Say It ... Vampire!|
|CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: Stupid, shiny Volvo owner.|
|PROSE/DESCRIPTIVE WRITING: The lion fell in love with the lamb.|
|GRAMMAR: How You Likin the Rain, Girl?|
|HIGHLY ADDICTIVE: My brand of heroin.|
My Wounded Soldier by counselor
1866 Edward just home from the war. Neighbor Bella has a tragedy and Edward delivers her baby. Seeing as she’s widowed, marriage makes sense. He doesn’t feel worthy, but he can’t step aside for her suitors. Competition amongst veterans.