| Ratings | |
| OVERALL AVERAGE RATING |  |
| PLOT DEVELOPMENT: Say It ... Vampire! | |
| CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: Stupid, shiny Volvo owner. | |
| PROSE/DESCRIPTIVE WRITING: The lion fell in love with the lamb. | |
| GRAMMAR: How You Likin the Rain, Girl? | |
| HIGHLY ADDICTIVE: My brand of heroin. | |
My Wounded Soldier by counselor
1866 Edward just home from the war. Neighbor Bella has a tragedy and Edward delivers her baby. Seeing as she’s widowed, marriage makes sense. He doesn’t feel worthy, but he can’t step aside for her suitors. Competition amongst veterans.
| Info | |
| Chapters | 77 |
| Word Count | 183,104 |
| Rating | M |
I love this author’s writing and and character development.
This story is so well written, it could be publishable. The author has clearly done a lot of research – if you didn’t know better you would think that it was actually written in the 1800s. The prose is beautiful, the relationship that develops between Edward and Bella is equally beautiful. A completely different story than anything you’ve read before. You won’t regret it.
I absolutely loved this story! The vernacular takes a little getting used to- but it fit the story perfectly. I felt like I was in the old west. The plot was tight with just enough drama to keep you interested. Highly recommend! Don’t let the 77 chapters scare you away. Some are fairly short.